a love unearnt v2

i have decided to revise this poem, as its an important poem to me, and it feels rushed...

 
a love unearnt

that perfect girl
right before my eyes
we both smile
i can see her disguise

all that she is
is someone shes not
i try to see through it
i try, i try, i cannot

does she have a clue?
i think that she may
i look at her
she looks away

shes perfect
in everything she does
her tiniest move
sets my heart abuzz

i dont have a chance
that’s something i’ve learnt
so i’ll back away
from a love unearnt

1 comments:

rmilana said...

I like it
it's simple but tells alot

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